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Not sure the Nexus-central map info is pertinent though --[[User:Klaa|Klaa]] 17:10, 24 September 2007 (CDT) | Not sure the Nexus-central map info is pertinent though --[[User:Klaa|Klaa]] 17:10, 24 September 2007 (CDT) | ||
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| + | * I liked your changes, feel free to make more. I changed the ending part as it seemed a bit too BL propagandish. Yea, you were consolidating in the NW corner, but losing ground in several other areas at that time. Feel free to word it better or remove it if ya feel like it. [[User:Jbobj|Jbobj]] 19:28, 24 September 2007 (CDT) | ||
Revision as of 17:28, 24 September 2007
Made a few edits to your rewrite Klaa, added in some more info about some events and clarified some things. Parts of your introduction didn't make sense to me, perhaps it could be worded better. ;) Jbobj 15:43, 24 September 2007 (CDT)
Eh feel free. Initially my goal was to redo some of the sentence structure; however, reading it felt a bit dry so started to have some fun with it.
Not sure the Nexus-central map info is pertinent though --Klaa 17:10, 24 September 2007 (CDT)
- I liked your changes, feel free to make more. I changed the ending part as it seemed a bit too BL propagandish. Yea, you were consolidating in the NW corner, but losing ground in several other areas at that time. Feel free to word it better or remove it if ya feel like it. Jbobj 19:28, 24 September 2007 (CDT)
